WALT: Use punctuation correctly and write in first person.
At the pools I saw big watery bouncy castle! I really wanted to go on it so I quickly got into the changing room to get changed into my favorite togs, and got into the pool with a splash ! It was great. I loved splashing around in the pool but it was time to go on the bouncy castle so I quickly got out of the pool and lined up with my sister, Paityn, we were going to race on it. We went over the big 'I', through the pig snout, dribbled through the bushy grass, climbed up the slide and did a roly poly down. I won and won a million more times it was all exiting! I'd call myself a champion!
