Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 29 May 2020
Scrat character description
Scrat is a rat from Ice age that loves his acorn!
Scrat has a nose that look's like a cat nose.
Srcat's feet look like chicken feet.
Scrat's eye's are as big as the sun
I think Scrat is cute because of his cute little bushy tail !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Hi Londyn,
ReplyDeleteI love your Scrat similes! I can tell what Scrat looks like because your similes are that descriptive. Maybe next time make the text the same size and check your spelling.
OMG!!!Amazing! Fantastic! Brilliant! I love it so much because you included animals a lot. Did you know that there is a sonic video game? from Indi-May.๐
ReplyDeleteGood job Londyn!! I like that you have used heaps of similes. My favourite one is...Scrats feet look like chicken feet.
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone!!!!!!!!!!
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